forget that day.
No,
I cannot.
You face,
is still
haunting me.
The ambulance shrieked,
my head turned,
and there you were.
Whitened cheek,
widen eyes,
opened mouth;
a face,
I could not recognize.
Was that you?
I thought not.
Was that you?
I hoped not.
Was that you?
I prayed not.
Was that really you?
I surrendered,
it was.
That,
was the one last time
I saw you,
in flesh.
Now,
you are here.
Sleeping like
a baby.
Rosy cheek,
closed eyes,
soft lips;
a face,
I once know.
Only,
missed a soul.
This is the day,
I remember.
The day,
you slipped away.
34 comments:
Your poems and your comments in my blog don't leave me indifferent!
Great Photos!
xxx
This is so haunting, I love the photos you've chosen. Wonderful blog :)
what happened??? om. really what happened? this is do sad! :( .
but i have to tell you something. i like your poetry. i do, i truly like that styyle. but! i feel like you need to let go. i have the feeling like you r always trying to keep the distance between poems and yourself. and that cant do. i see potentail. pls, dont take it the wrong way. im trying to be honest and constructive. i dont have to tell you 100 times, that this is one of my fav blog places.
This is so sad but the pictures are so beautiful... haunting is definitely the right way to describe it.
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i just came across your blog, it's fantastic, beautiful writing xx
pretty and such genius words .
♥♥
oh dear, you actually read the entire thing?!
it was more like.. therapy for me or something... hahahah
but thanks anyway for taking the time to visit my blog! i really appreciate it <3
where abouts in hong kong do you live? and what do you do?
hope you have a great day tomorrow! xxxxxxx
i love your use of personal poetry intermixed with beautiful yet fitting images. . great blog! thanks for checking mine out!
I love your little anecdotes.They fit always perfect to the photos.
you are the amazing one!!
wow, thanks for that grand compliment =]
and these photographs are really very gorgeous!
xxx
Wow your blog is really great! :)
that is so beautiful. i could only write something half that quality once in a blue moon. gawd, i sound so old saying that =S
stunning pictures, you have a beautiful blog xx
i absolutely love the first two photos .
eerily devastating poem .
x
your writing is soo good! I love reading your stories! and I like the pics you have chosen too
The photos are amaizing!
An the letter it's very nice...it's a song? who is it?
Kisses
Beautiful images you chose to accompany the poem.
this was so beautiful!
just lovely!:)
xx
oh my gosh! this is very intense...and i really love it. i hope for your sake it is not a recount...if so..i am sorry.
all the images are very beautiful and the writing really touched me! i loved it!
xxx LM
wow! i'm almost speechless.. the poem is very very sad and the pictures fit snugly! the post animates to thinking!!!
the poem is beautiful as well as the dreamy photos. :)
I love this poem It's quite sad:( The photos are so beautiful.
I loooove these photos, especially the last one - they really work with your searing, heartfelt poetry!
xoxox,
CC
these are so gorgeous, i do enjoy reading your posts, they're like a fashionable fairytale.
or tradgedy in this poems case- so sad!
mxx
how come you find the perfect photos and words to go together
your blog's enchanted me
I love these photos, great great great post, as always, I love reading your stories,
x
u're welcome. you use to choose the greatest pictures!
All ok?
x
This is so beautiful. Such a powerful poem. I can tell the person whom wrote it was so passionate.
Lovely photos too :)
What a sad post :( The texts & photos go so well together! I hope you are fine though!
gorgeous photos and you writes so beautifully!
wow did you write that yourself. it sounds so eerie and kind of haunting, but really romantic and mysterious. i love it. my favorite photo is the first one, too.
xoxo,
Micaela
nice blog! check out mine maybe? :)
very strong and beautiful photos!
love those boots!
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